Is it better than your swing jammydodger?
You look like single figure handicap to me, great tempo as someone already said.
Is your putting and chipping poor? - can see no reason why you're off 24.
How far do you hit your driver and 6i?
If I were being picky, I would ask you to look at your hips and right foot at impact. Ideally, your hips will have turned more and your right heal would be a few inches off the ground.
Tempo seems great, Id say that you dont seem to "get through" the ball, is that you hitting the driver normally or easing off a little?
do you use your driver on the short stuff also?