Writing about golf, taken the plunge.

Good standard of writing so far.

Much prefer your 'observations on golf style' to the more 'personal golf diary" style.

If that makes any sense!
 
Many thanks Huds.....blog 4 (part 1) goes live on Monday evening, which is a little more "personal" but I've tried to steer away from the usual "Then I hit a 7 iron for my 2nd shot". Someone called the next blog coming up "The Incident", didn't go with that for a title but I'm hoping this thread should liven up in discussion over the "incident". It's a good one.
 
Great reading, really enjoyed it.
But can I give one bit of advice without sounding too critical? Well I'm going to anyway :p

Sometimes reading a wall of text can be off putting and hinders the flow of the script. I think that if you put a few paragraphs in place then it will flow a lot better and be easier to read.

Great stuff though, keep it up!

Edit: Just reading the 2nd blog and really like the added pics that break up the text, looks and reads loads better!
 
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Chris,

Enjoyed the last read. Funnily enough I had a similar instance regarding standing behind my playing partner in a club comp (it was my first ever golfing comp). He pointed out that I shouldn't do this for the reasons you mentioned in your blog so i stepped away and all was good ;). Schoolboy error on their part by the sounds of it.
 
having read your blog about the incident ,i feel that you are going to have to grow a pair.
By that i mean you really need to confront the bloke who has responded to the original facebook post.
tell him face to face your side of the story and see if the waters flow the other way when he knows the full ins and outs and not just bad feeling from bad losers on a public media site.
dont stay quiet about it as you will be seen as the bad guy ,stand up for yourself and your club .
like i have said ,GROW A PAIR .
good luck and let us know how you get on . :thup:
 
having read your blog about the incident ,i feel that you are going to have to grow a pair.
By that i mean you really need to confront the bloke who has responded to the original facebook post.
tell him face to face your side of the story and see if the waters flow the other way when he knows the full ins and outs and not just bad feeling from bad losers on a public media site.
dont stay quiet about it as you will be seen as the bad guy ,stand up for yourself and your club .
like i have said ,GROW A PAIR .
good luck and let us know how you get on . :thup:

You're right, I think the reaction I got was more upsetting for me purely because I felt like the person in question had gone behind my back and I didn't see him as that kind of character really. I should probably speak to him about it. I think the whole situation was discussed at a recent committee meeting so I'll wait to see what the minutes say about it and then work out my plan of action.
 
You're right, I think the reaction I got was more upsetting for me purely because I felt like the person in question had gone behind my back and I didn't see him as that kind of character really. I should probably speak to him about it. I think the whole situation was discussed at a recent committee meeting so I'll wait to see what the minutes say about it and then work out my plan of action.


thats a bit more positive swanny, you really must stand up for yourself in this ,if you dont im betting that even if you were to leave this club and join another it would follow you there . as sure as hell if people start slinging mud some of it will stick ,you have to get it sorted asap to stop it getting out of hand .
 
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